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His eyes like the rays of the sun
Burning fiery red against his pale skin
They draw me closer, full of danger
Yet I can’t turn away

His long fangs are razor blades
Ready to sink into my neck
He edges closer
And I catch my breath
Yet I can’t turn away

I freeze like a deer in headlights
I am trapped
He is the vampire
And I am his prey
Yet I can’t turn away
©2008-2009 *E-vay
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Here's one of the TWENTY FREAKIN POEMS I HAD TO WRITE FOR ENGLISH!!!!!!!!!!!!! *huff huff*

I kind of like how this turned out... It was a simile/metaphor poem... Those are really easy poems to write, in my opinion. ...And I felt I needed to do at least ONE vampire poem! :D Enjoy

Still can't get these categories right >.>
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totaly awsome job:eyepopping:

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the light was betrayed me.The darkness is calling my name.I am at a crossroads and my head is clouded...but my heart knows the way.
thank you ^^

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I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior.

:| because you know .. all my life, i've been spelling 'false' wrong my whole life , although i am not sure why i stated that twice, but all my life, all my life .. etc - iMonkehh
vampires are very fun

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\\\\\\\"yes i have a hand what about it?\\\\\\\"
Huh, sounds like Twilight.

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It's so crazy.......it has to be done.......
very well written :clap:

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People say I'm evil...
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What? I didn't say they were wrong...
*fetile position* There's no place like home! There's no place like home! There's no place like home! There's no place like home!

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You think that you know me?


I'm the girl you never get just quite what you see.;p

You can see I want you, by the way I push you away.:love:

Dont judge me tomarrow by the way I'm acting today!:shakefist:

-I'm the girl whose kickin' the coke machine!
YOSH!!! awsome!

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Jesus babeh

Hoshi
:love: :kiss: !!Team Jacob!! :love: :kiss:

The dance flo silly, the fellas gon' feel me
no prob,you totaly are an awsome poem writer...your poems make me full of emotions^///^ yup keep at it ^-^

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the light was betrayed me.The darkness is calling my name.I am at a crossroads and my head is clouded...but my heart knows the way.
I like this one.. Very much to be honest... But that can also be because I'm sort of obsessed with vampires..

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Naruto x Hikari
Twilight is amazing!

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Would you still love me if I were crazy?

maybe they're on crack...
or maybe there just morons... [link]

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