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The Vampire by *E-vay:iconE-vay:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


His eyes like the rays of the sun
Burning fiery red against his pale skin
They draw me closer, full of danger
Yet I can’t turn away

His long fangs are razor blades
Ready to sink into my neck
He edges closer
And I catch my breath
Yet I can’t turn away

I freeze like a deer in headlights
I am trapped
He is the vampire
And I am his prey
Yet I can’t turn away
©2008-2009 *E-vay
:icone-vay:

Author's Comments

Here's one of the TWENTY FREAKIN POEMS I HAD TO WRITE FOR ENGLISH!!!!!!!!!!!!! *huff huff*

I kind of like how this turned out... It was a simile/metaphor poem... Those are really easy poems to write, in my opinion. ...And I felt I needed to do at least ONE vampire poem! :D Enjoy

Still can't get these categories right >.>

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:iconpheonixfoxblood24:
~pheonixfoxblood24 May 12, 2008, 4:06:44 PM
totaly awsome job:eyepopping:

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The fire of hell with incinerate the world.The hounds of the underworld will feast upon your flesh.The skies will weep with blood and I will be the ruler of the dead and of the tortured.
:icone-vay:
*E-vay May 12, 2008, 4:07:01 PM
thank you ^^

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I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior.

:| because you know .. all my life, i've been spelling 'false' wrong my whole life , although i am not sure why i stated that twice, but all my life, all my life .. etc - iMonkehh
:iconwolfvahn:
~wolfvahn May 12, 2008, 4:07:10 PM
vampires are very fun

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\\\\\\\"yes i have a hand what about it?\\\\\\\"
:iconhigureharuno:
~HigureHaruno May 12, 2008, 4:08:16 PM
Huh, sounds like Twilight.

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It's so crazy.......it has to be done.......
:icondaemonarts:
*DaemonArts May 12, 2008, 4:08:24 PM
very well written :clap:

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People say I'm evil...
...
...
...
What? I didn't say they were wrong...
:iconnarusaku4everinlife:
~narusaku4everinlife May 12, 2008, 4:09:02 PM
*fetile position* There's no place like home! There's no place like home! There's no place like home! There's no place like home!

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You think that you know me?


I'm the girl you never get just quite what you see.;p

You can see I want you, by the way I push you away.:love:

Dont judge me tomarrow by the way I'm acting today!:shakefist:

-I'm the girl whose kickin' the coke machine!
:iconxxamayahoshixx:
~xxAmayaHoshixx May 12, 2008, 4:09:04 PM
YOSH!!! awsome!

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Jesus babeh
☆
Hoshi
:love: :kiss: !!Team Jacob!! :love: :kiss:
So baby, be my girl (all the time)
And we can share this ecstasy
As long as we believe in love

Michael Jackson my love
:iconpheonixfoxblood24:
~pheonixfoxblood24 May 12, 2008, 4:09:52 PM
no prob,you totaly are an awsome poem writer...your poems make me full of emotions^///^ yup keep at it ^-^

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The fire of hell with incinerate the world.The hounds of the underworld will feast upon your flesh.The skies will weep with blood and I will be the ruler of the dead and of the tortured.
:iconrachelxnaruto:
~RachelxNaruto May 12, 2008, 4:09:58 PM
I like this one.. Very much to be honest... But that can also be because I'm sort of obsessed with vampires..

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How to get pageviews: [link]

Naruto x Hikari
:iconshikamylove:
~shikamylove May 12, 2008, 4:10:51 PM
Twilight is amazing!

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Would you still love me if I were crazy?

maybe they're on crack...
or maybe there just morons... [link]
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