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The world knows only dark
It formed from hate
It grows from pain
It shies from love
It feeds off of fear
And it lives alone

Those who exist in this world are cursed to be alone
They hide in the dark
Too absorbed by their own fear
Such fear morphs into hate
They will never know love
And so they shall only feel pain

Before long all that is left is the pain
The agony of feeling alone
No partner to share one’s love
Only the dark
And the growing hate
Of living in fear

No one ever tried to understand their fear
To learn from their pain
They were too focused on their hate
They believed that they were all alone
They did not know they could defeat the dark
With the power of love

For it is love
That is the cure for fear
It is pure, even in the darkest of dark
It can heal all pain
It touches those who are alone
And it is the enemy of hate

So if everyone put aside their hate
And everyone embraced love
And learned that they will never be alone
They will have nothing to fear
And they will no longer feel pain
Then the world will no longer be in the dark
©2008-2009 *E-vay
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Here's one of the TWENTY FREAKIN POEMS I HAD TO WRITE FOR ENGLISH!!!!!!!!!!!!! *huff huff*

Ahhh the sestina.. the hardest of all poems in the history of LIFE!!!!
I know it's annoying, but it's better than I thought it would be. If you don't know what a sestina is, it's a poem that contains 6 stanzas, with 6 lines per stanza.
Every line must end with the same words as the stanza before it, but in this order:
Stanza 1-
A
B
C
D
E
F
Stanza 2-
F
A
E
B
D
C
Stanza 3-
C
F
D
A
B
E
Stanza 4-
E
C
B
F
A
D
Stanza 5-
D
E
A
C
F
B
Stanza 6-
B
D
F
E
C
A

Don't bash this poem please. If you think it's so bad, try writing your own freakin sestina.. You'll see how hard it is
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this reminds me of the lonely people in naruto...

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Would you still love me if I were crazy?

maybe they're on crack...
or maybe there just morons... [link]
Cool!

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To avoid innuendo, the Wii should've been called the Perfect Nintendo Entertainment System, or "PNES" for short.
the world is a very dark place ....... 8D

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boom boom boom.
Talented in Art and Story, I bow to you in respect. lol
I don't see why anyone would bash this poem. It's lovely... better than anyone I know could do, anyway. Be proud of it. = )
I laugh at your dislike of writing poems! I hate writing them too, mostly because I am terrible at them, but also because they come with so many regualtions.

In any case, I think this is pretty good! Interesting, to say the least.

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Would you bring your attention to me
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wow! You did it! I'm so proud of you!!!!! and it's wonderful :clap:

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I'm starting to find joy in life again. I've found freedom.
O-O awsome again:eyepopping:totaly write more

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the light was betrayed me.The darkness is calling my name.I am at a crossroads and my head is clouded...but my heart knows the way.
you have a dark out look on life

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no not always

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I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior.

:| because you know .. all my life, i've been spelling 'false' wrong my whole life , although i am not sure why i stated that twice, but all my life, all my life .. etc - iMonkehh

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