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The opposite of warmth, what is it?
Is it the cold, dark smile of a culprit?
Is it the frigid glow from his sharpened blade,
Or is it the fear of a child, alone and afraid?
Is it as simple to explain as day is to night,
As ebony black is to ivory white?
Maybe it’s deeper, something unclear
Like the leap of an elk to the prance of a deer
Maybe it isn’t as easy as “cold”
Or maybe it’s something that hasn’t been told
©2008-2009 *E-vay
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Here's one of the TWENTY FREAKIN POEMS I HAD TO WRITE FOR ENGLISH!!!!!!!!!!!!! *huff huff*

I'm only submitting the ones that I think are okay...

(I really dislike categories for literature)
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the world is a dark place ......... lol.

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wow thats so awesome I love it ^^

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AVATAR BASE BY lizbot
im going into high school i cant wait to do all this (Sarcastic)

It really good i like it

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-Fel
I like this one cause its true!

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Obito: I am- OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOObito!------- Challenge me!
Rin: ^^;
Kakashi: :O
Yondime (4th Hokage): . . . *speechless*

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Nice piece, though I like your stories better. XD
WOW!!that is really good! I'm in an honors english class. they have us write every songle day!!!but that is so cool!!!
you really are good at poems, like the firefly one you wrote for your grandfather. it's better poetry than i've ever read published. probably cuz it rymes, it's fluent, it has deep meaning, and people can relate to it.

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Would you still love me if I were crazy?

maybe they're on crack...
or maybe there just morons... [link]
nice poem it gives of a cold feeling of lonliness that can only be taken on by those with strong hearts

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\\\\\\\"yes i have a hand what about it?\\\\\\\"
O-O OMG THAT WAS TOTALY AWSOME,and great rhyming to ^-^:headbang::eyepopping::reading: you should write more poems

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the light was betrayed me.The darkness is calling my name.I am at a crossroads and my head is clouded...but my heart knows the way.
Deep.

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